I am selecting the stories in the order in which they were added to the group. The first four were:
- Hallow Carnaval
- Park Love
- Three Days
- Love Clock
The next four are highlighted. I will change them in 3 or 4 days.
Prof. Mongar posted the instructions for posting and critiquing manuscripts and they have been marked in the Spotlight Section below. If you have any questions write carlos an e-mail.
I will mark 4 different stories for review every 3 or 4 days, so that they will appear with a purple box on top of the list. You can add your critiques in any order you want but it is suggested that you critique the marked ones first.
To post your final draft of the fiction story
http://litterary.com/group/4/view (Mondays and Wednesdays)
http://litterary.com/group/3/view (Tuesday and Thursdays)
Sign up (upper right hand c...
Vinicio Tejada
802-05-8715
INGL 3238 096
FINAL FICTION MANUSCRIPT
Going to extremes and getting personal
“Ugly things happen on a beautiful day”, Logan always said with confidence. He wa...
“Mom, you remember my boyfriend Kevin. No wait. This is Kevin, you remember him, my fiancé I said out loud while staring at my own reflection in the mirror. I could barely put on my lip-gloss as...
On our way to the island of Motiki, a nearby island where people go to sunbathe and have fun. Halfway there the winds and tides started hitting the boat. It got pretty unstable but we kept our pace...
Characters
1.Bongo Jusepthy Krinaldi- Older twin by just one minute. Is a dreamer but weak of character. Very handsome and a member of an Aristocrat family.
2.Bengie Duarsof Krinaldi- Tw...
By: Namir Massini
Ingl 3238 - 096 FINAL FICTION MANUSCRIPT
I am cursed, cursed by this gift my mother gave me, maybe because I misbehave when I was a child, I really don’t know but, now ever...
Document Download Link (for easier reading): http://rapidshare.com/files/67901231/World_s_End_White_Dawn.doc.html
Also information on screen writing:
http://www.screenwriting.info/
A short film ab...
Jose Lopez
843-04-3811
INGL 3238 S.096
The Final of the Final Fiction Manuscript For the moment
With buzz of the alarm, Daniel tried to wake up; he was distressed since he knew he was alread...
To post your final draft of the fiction story
http://litterary.com/group/4/view (Mondays and Wednesdays)
http://litterary.com/group/3/view (Tuesday and Thursdays)
Sign up (upper right hand c...
There was this guy named Hicks. He was riding a very good looking motorcycle through a very dark
place at Mayaguez. He was passing by the Zoo when all at the sudden some guys appeared ...
Surviving Chronicles
December 29, 2039
It’s been four days since Christmas, mom God bless her found a couple of notebooks and gave them to me as a present. I was thinking of drawing ...
Alexis Berrios Ramos
INGL 3238-096
oct-5-07
Midnight Adventures of the Unknown
It was 10:43 am and the alarm did not go off that morning, I was late ...
Marcos R. Carlo
INGL 3238
096
Park Love
Pepe was a twenty year old college student, at UPR of Mayaguez. Pepe is an athlete who wakes every morning at five o’ clock to exercise. He alw...
The midnight moon covered the skies. Across the rough rain on the Palika Valley you can only hear the deep sound of silence. The stars in the sky were the only witness to the huge ...
Lorimar del Rio
INGL3238-096
It was my birthday. My boyfriend had gone to get his car because the person who was going to give us a ride was too drunk too drive or maybe I was too drunk to notice t...
I looked at my feet and all I could see was red—that unmistakable red that one would never forget. I walked across that red carpet and there she was, alone and abandoned. I walked towards the ...
“Forever”
By: Camille Pedraja
The sun had long set on the horizon when Athena ran desperately through the back entrance, down the garden maze, getting closer to the darkest part of Dante’s es...
THE PETRUS EMPIRE
Ivana Maura was a lady from Guanasto, a southern island of the Platinios Archipielago, located in the middle of the biggest ocean of the Petrus, the Rocky Planet. Guanasto was th...
Creative Writing (Tuesday and Thursdays)
News
Fourth group
Mignight Adventures of the Unknown
Surviving Chronicles
It wasn't meant to happened
World's End, White Dawn
I just marked the last group of stories. Enjoy your turkey responsibly.
Third group
- THE PETRUS EMPIRE
- NIGHTMARE OF DESIRE
- The Sight of Death
- The Revenge of Hicks
Second group of stories for critique
These were the last 4 stories marked for critique.
- The tale of a true heart
- Forever
- My face
- Imaginary VIP
The next four are highlighted. Remember that you are responsible of critiquing the stories for your classmates.
First 4 stories for critique
I am selecting the stories in the order in which they were added to the group. The first four were:
- Hallow Carnaval
- Park Love
- Three Days
- Love Clock
The next four are highlighted. I will change them in 3 or 4 days.
Instructions for critiquing
Prof. Mongar posted the instructions for posting and critiquing manuscripts and they have been marked in the Spotlight Section below. If you have any questions write carlos an e-mail.
I will mark 4 different stories for review every 3 or 4 days, so that they will appear with a purple box on top of the list. You can add your critiques in any order you want but it is suggested that you critique the marked ones first.
What's left to do?
11/08 to 11/27
(22) Fiction Critiques posted and discussed online according to instructions
11/27
Bring Portfolio Ideas
Hand in five formal journals, MLA, pocket folder (and so on)
Final Exam Day
Poetry Reading -Location TBA
Bring portfolio and a final draft of your best poem which you will read at the poetry reading.
Description
Submit your story for the workshop. The discussions of the stories will be done virtually so you are required to comment on your peers stories.
Information
Spotlight
Instructions for Posting Fiction Manuscripts
smongar
To post your final draft of the fiction story http://litterary.com/group/4/view (Mondays and Wednesdays) http://litterary.com/group/3/view (Tuesday and Thursdays) Sign up (upper right hand c...
Documents (Add Your Own)
Three days
melqui
FINAL FICTION MANUSCRIPT Melquisedec González Dávila Ingl 3238-0...
Going to extremes and getting personal
ViniGrind
Vinicio Tejada 802-05-8715 INGL 3238 096 FINAL FICTION MANUSCRIPT Going to extremes and getting personal “Ugly things happen on a beautiful day”, Logan always said with confidence. He wa...
Hurt for Life
Stella
“Mom, you remember my boyfriend Kevin. No wait. This is Kevin, you remember him, my fiancé I said out loud while staring at my own reflection in the mirror. I could barely put on my lip-gloss as...
Out Cold
svm29870
On our way to the island of Motiki, a nearby island where people go to sunbathe and have fun. Halfway there the winds and tides started hitting the boat. It got pretty unstable but we kept our pace...
Love Clock
bika
Characters 1.Bongo Jusepthy Krinaldi- Older twin by just one minute. Is a dreamer but weak of character. Very handsome and a member of an Aristocrat family. 2.Bengie Duarsof Krinaldi- Tw...
The Sight of Death
Tsuki_Hana
By: Namir Massini Ingl 3238 - 096 FINAL FICTION MANUSCRIPT I am cursed, cursed by this gift my mother gave me, maybe because I misbehave when I was a child, I really don’t know but, now ever...
World's End, White Dawn
Hiram
Document Download Link (for easier reading): http://rapidshare.com/files/67901231/World_s_End_White_Dawn.doc.html Also information on screen writing: http://www.screenwriting.info/ A short film ab...
It wasn't meant to happened
macha86
Jose Lopez 843-04-3811 INGL 3238 S.096 The Final of the Final Fiction Manuscript For the moment With buzz of the alarm, Daniel tried to wake up; he was distressed since he knew he was alread...
Instructions for Posting Fiction Manuscripts
smongar
To post your final draft of the fiction story http://litterary.com/group/4/view (Mondays and Wednesdays) http://litterary.com/group/3/view (Tuesday and Thursdays) Sign up (upper right hand c...
Far-Fetched Venture
nessarie16
Santiago 1 Vanessa Santiago Professor Mongar English 3238 Section 096 5 November 2007 A Far-Fetch Venture Fina...
Big Trouble by Ana Laura Bonilla
abv27842
Big Trouble Laureen is a student that studies at Harvard Law School. She graduated from New York University with a bachelor's ...
The Revenge of Hicks
XXXEDXXX
There was this guy named Hicks. He was riding a very good looking motorcycle through a very dark place at Mayaguez. He was passing by the Zoo when all at the sudden some guys appeared ...
Surviving Chronicles
eusoj
Surviving Chronicles December 29, 2039 It’s been four days since Christmas, mom God bless her found a couple of notebooks and gave them to me as a present. I was thinking of drawing ...
Mignight Adventures of the Unknown
Alexis90
Alexis Berrios Ramos INGL 3238-096 oct-5-07 Midnight Adventures of the Unknown It was 10:43 am and the alarm did not go off that morning, I was late ...
Park Love
kitin
Marcos R. Carlo INGL 3238 096 Park Love Pepe was a twenty year old college student, at UPR of Mayaguez. Pepe is an athlete who wakes every morning at five o’ clock to exercise. He alw...
Hallow Carnaval
Rocker150
The midnight moon covered the skies. Across the rough rain on the Palika Valley you can only hear the deep sound of silence. The stars in the sky were the only witness to the huge ...
Imaginary VIP
WitchBaby
Lorimar del Rio INGL3238-096 It was my birthday. My boyfriend had gone to get his car because the person who was going to give us a ride was too drunk too drive or maybe I was too drunk to notice t...
My face
Lore
I looked at my feet and all I could see was red—that unmistakable red that one would never forget. I walked across that red carpet and there she was, alone and abandoned. I walked towards the ...
Forever
pallas_athena
“Forever” By: Camille Pedraja The sun had long set on the horizon when Athena ran desperately through the back entrance, down the garden maze, getting closer to the darkest part of Dante’s es...
THE PETRUS EMPIRE
Phantommn
THE PETRUS EMPIRE Ivana Maura was a lady from Guanasto, a southern island of the Platinios Archipielago, located in the middle of the biggest ocean of the Petrus, the Rocky Planet. Guanasto was th...