I am selecting the stories in the order in which they were added to the group. The first four were:
- From the Hell of Afrika Korps
- The Christmas Present
- The Madhouse
- Alien in the Attic
The next four are highlighted. I will change them in 3 or 4 days.
Prof. Mongar posted the instructions for posting and critiquing manuscripts and they have been marked in the Spotlight Section below. If you have any questions write carlos an e-mail.
I will mark 4 different stories for review every 3 or 4 days, so that they will appear with a purple box on top of the list. You can add your critiques in any order you want but it is suggested that you critique the marked ones first.
To post your final draft of the fiction story
http://litterary.com/group/4/view (Mondays and Wednesdays)
http://litterary.com/group/3/view (Tuesday and Thursdays)
Sign up (upper right hand c...
INGL3238-100
Eugibimar Román
Mera had been on the battle for the last three days, totally restless and without the chance to sleep. She barely ate. Her usual joy toward life had ran away from her...
The One Adventure Of The League Of “Super Her0es”
It all began one sorrowful day when thnor the people wanted to pay for their expensive maintenance. Shortly after this chaos occurred. Super hero...
Maria-Cristina Aleman Cordero INGL 3238 Sec. 100 Prof. Mongar
Steve Halibut was a hard working business man. He worked for a telemarketing agency selling encyclopedia
sets and dictionaries and ...
His wrist watch showed 1:37 AM. Marcelo was still awake waiting for a sound that meant that Santa Claus had arrived. He left cookies and milk on the table before going to sleep. He had never been u...
Luis Ayala Crespo
Ingl 3238 sec. 100
The year 2026
This is a history of tragedy, sadness and destruction. Humans have lived through many ages, many difficult moments but the year 2026, r...
Gerardo J. González
Prof. Sonja Mongar
English 3238 -100
Synopsis
In 2830 ac, a second great war started in which many clans with different abilities took participation and almost wiped themselve...
Kidany Y. Soler Massol
Prof. Sonja Mongar
English 3238 -100
Synopsis:
Threads of Fantasy are a story based on the balance and the fate of Gaia. Gaia is the world the Cirrians live in pea...
“Finally, having fun” – that’s what I thought when I entered to the pub after waiting in line for 30 minutes. I took a test for which I had been studying for weeks; it was time for me to take a bre...
Benny Martínez
Section 100
Prof. Mongar
I’ve always liked drinking and smoking, two of life’s greatest pleasures man. Ever since I was chiquito my father would come home drunk. He’d come up to...
Paola K. Feliu Suarez
INGL 3238- 100
FINAL FICTION MANUSCRIPT
It was a rainy night in the suburbs of La Parguera, the gusty wind was whipping on the cups of the trees that were illuminated...
To post your final draft of the fiction story
http://litterary.com/group/4/view (Mondays and Wednesdays)
http://litterary.com/group/3/view (Tuesday and Thursdays)
Sign up (upper right hand c...
Picture the University of Puerto Rico in the 1960’s were afros, hot pants, mini skirts, psychedelic and ethnic fashion were cool. In January of 1962, Lila a young lady whose interest was art, musi...
Keiichi is a 21 year old college student who went on vacation with his friends to Alaska. They wanted to ski. So they prepare themselves with the ski equipment and went to the top of the mountai...
I wake up, in an alley lying on the floor. I can’t remember much from last night, only running away from dad and a big intense light that blinded me. Constant beeping and loud sounds, like “beep-be...
This is the deal. It's 1943 and the “Afrika Korps” are rampaging throughout northern Africa, were the Germans are trying to gain control of the region by all means available. Under the command of f...
Batto N. Vega Vigo
ENGL 3238, Section 100
FINAL FICTION MANUSCRIPT
The madhouse
This is the fifth year that my twenty roommates and I had been used for kid’s pornography. The night feels asphyxia...
It’s been a long time since I met Alex.Everything happened so fast that I couldn't find a way in which I could help him. I’ll always remember that precise time in which our lives crossed, at exactl...
Chapter I
It all started last month when my father’s lawyer called announcing the death of Uncle James. He had left his mansion to my father and we moved in two weeks later, even t...
Creative Writing (Mondays and Wednesdays)
News
Fourth group
The year 2026
"The Mask"
Death Dealers
Threaths of Fantasy
Under a full Moon
The last 5 stories are highlighted. Enjoy your turkey responsibly.
Third group of stories for critique
Wake up my darling
Young Blood Running
Unfinished Business
The Raise of Bastoria
Next 4 stories for critique
This was the second group of stories marked for critique.
- Didn’t expect it like this…
- "A Rose"
- The taste of revenge
- Gone
The next four are highlighted. Remember that you are responsible of critiquing the stories for your classmates.
First 4 stories for critique
I am selecting the stories in the order in which they were added to the group. The first four were:
- From the Hell of Afrika Korps
- The Christmas Present
- The Madhouse
- Alien in the Attic
The next four are highlighted. I will change them in 3 or 4 days.
Instructions for critiquing
Prof. Mongar posted the instructions for posting and critiquing manuscripts and they have been marked in the Spotlight Section below. If you have any questions write carlos an e-mail.
I will mark 4 different stories for review every 3 or 4 days, so that they will appear with a purple box on top of the list. You can add your critiques in any order you want but it is suggested that you critique the marked ones first.
Poetry Reading
Final Exam - Poetry Reading 12/06 @ 12:00 - bring portfolio and a final draft of your best poem which you will read at the poetry reading.
What's left to do?
11/07 to 11/26
Fiction discussions online. 4 each class day.
11/26
Bring Portfolio Ideas
Hand in five formal journals, MLA, pocket folder (and so on)
Final Exam Day
Poetry Reading -Location TBA
Bring portfolio and a final draft of your best poem which you will read at
the poetry reading.
Description
Submit your story for the workshop. The discussions of the stories will be done virtually so you are required to comment on your peers stories.
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Instructions for Posting Fiction Manuscripts
smongar
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smongar
To post your final draft of the fiction story http://litterary.com/group/4/view (Mondays and Wednesdays) http://litterary.com/group/3/view (Tuesday and Thursdays) Sign up (upper right hand c...
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